Everything to me

Everything to me

A Poem by Abhishek Ramkissoon

i admit doings things

things not so rights

things which i should not have done

things which kept us apart

I admit i shed tears

tears which flow when you are not here

tears of blood which show pain in my heart

tears which remind me how much i Love you

i admit feeling lonely

lonely, sad and surrounded by fear

lonely when i don't hear from you

lonely because i always need you

i admit being gloomy

gloomy when i rememberall the talks we had

gloomy when i miss you

glommy when i can not see you

i admit being not me

am not me when am not with you

i love you and i need you

how could it possibly be that i can not even tell you

how can i not be so desperate to be with you

you are everything for me

my world, my happiness

© 2013 Abhishek Ramkissoon


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Sometime we can learn too late to appreciate the good people in our life. If we are lucky and they are kind. They may forgive us if we have changed our ways. A sad poem with some wisdom. We are held accountable for all deeds and actions. A excellent poem.
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Added on May 30, 2011
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Abhishek Ramkissoon
Abhishek Ramkissoon

Vacoas, Plaine Wilhems, Mauritius



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I seek and derive most pleasure form writing,i do not really have a real category of genre,i write and its up to people to see what it really means..i write basically about myself,my own experinces bu.. more..

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