Your lie

Your lie

A Poem by Abhishek Ramkissoon
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A heart Broken's lonely story

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Lying on the grass in that lonesome night
freezing out with bare skins touching the grass
my moist eyes made stars look so much far far away
blurry as they are i only wondered how could they be so far
my head facing the sky
my heat felt hard i know i lost my pride
i thought you'd never give up on me
all this time i cried and i now i think I've been so crazy
you made it up baby
am left here drunk and feeling bizarre
out of frustration killing myself so hard
you are there living with your head held up high
no regrets no remorse
you just forgot me 
and it took you a while
 now i don't know how i will survive..
how many times i said i'll be stronger and forget the time that went by
smiling and shedding tears
i just got the feeling 
for the first time
i am living not to live but to die
and all that happened just because of you
because of
Your lie :(

© 2013 Abhishek Ramkissoon


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I could relate to it.. Having believed and hoped in a love which turned into a heartbreak ... and the worst part is when the one we love has found other grounds and is living happily, while we are here, sad and lonely. You nicely drew that image in the poem and the pain could be felt throughout .. I also loved the beginning picture with the lying in the grass and staring at the sky with tears in your eyes ~ It is a good imagery of wishing for a love that we cannot reach for .. Well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Time is the greatest healer.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could relate to it.. Having believed and hoped in a love which turned into a heartbreak ... and the worst part is when the one we love has found other grounds and is living happily, while we are here, sad and lonely. You nicely drew that image in the poem and the pain could be felt throughout .. I also loved the beginning picture with the lying in the grass and staring at the sky with tears in your eyes ~ It is a good imagery of wishing for a love that we cannot reach for .. Well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truth hurts...lie worst !

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Abhishek Ramkissoon
Abhishek Ramkissoon

Vacoas, Plaine Wilhems, Mauritius



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I seek and derive most pleasure form writing,i do not really have a real category of genre,i write and its up to people to see what it really means..i write basically about myself,my own experinces bu.. more..

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