You and Me..

You and Me..

A Poem by Abhishek Ramkissoon
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Just a bit of something big, the final draft is yet to be written :)

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There was a time 
When butterflies flirted with flowers 
and the Moon looked like abodes in heaven
That was the time 
when he and she were smitten
when everyday began they smiled 
for its a new day with the thought they'll meet again
their eyes spoke much 
in the crowd within themselves they were lost
that was a time when the sky was blue and bright 
it was only rainbows and butterflies
then came by a storm, disrupting 
interrupting, swaying all thoughts and wishes
he and she parted ways 
none thinking whether there was to be another wave
bringing them closer, breaking the chains
yet they did meet again
destiny or fate
one the road they came face to face
years went by, yet memories remained
he and she had to meet again
the storm came and went,
he and she thought, that was a last goodbye
yet when he saw she, there still was that spark in their eye
they talked, they laughed, they brought back
all that time which went to waste
but the sun did rise, and everything was fine
for he she was still so very pretty
how long has it been, yet he still thought she was the prettiest
life led us here, and now when i think about it
am sure, when he'll die, be sure
he will die loving you..loving you..

Dear She..he missed You..
a lot...a lot..
yes, he did...
a lot.

© 2013 Abhishek Ramkissoon


Author's Note

Abhishek Ramkissoon
written listening to Dear Bobbie-Yellowcard..

love is what i remember! Do you remember?
<3

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It was a beautiful write... The pictures u have added to this poem added a pinch of magic in getting the image of your "he" and "she" [;)]

They parted but they did meet again even after the last goodbye, be it termed destiny or fate. The beauty in the write is amazing.

She looked the most prettiest, even after years passed... Wow!!! Its true love....


I loved this write the most... Thanks for this wonder write....


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It was a beautiful write... The pictures u have added to this poem added a pinch of magic in getting the image of your "he" and "she" [;)]

They parted but they did meet again even after the last goodbye, be it termed destiny or fate. The beauty in the write is amazing.

She looked the most prettiest, even after years passed... Wow!!! Its true love....


I loved this write the most... Thanks for this wonder write....


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 14, 2012
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Abhishek Ramkissoon
Abhishek Ramkissoon

Vacoas, Plaine Wilhems, Mauritius



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I seek and derive most pleasure form writing,i do not really have a real category of genre,i write and its up to people to see what it really means..i write basically about myself,my own experinces bu.. more..

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