Looking Out for a God

Looking Out for a God

A Poem by dicey jones

So what if there is no God,
What would be the point if we are to say there is a God.
O! how blinded are we, how myopic our view.
Everything here is just a matter of intellectual debate,
Not a shred of thinking, or even one reason relates.

I believe there  is a God, You don't. 
You believe, I don't.
So why argue, when then the concept of God you share I
Your non-believe makes you a believer of a God who don't exist,
My believe makes me a believer in a God who Exist....
Don't you see we are the same.
The same; our logical thinking leads us to God in separate ways!

The problem here is Faith, not God.
I have a Faith, you do...or don't.
God is not some dude siting up there and watching us down here.
God is nature. 
IT is the laws of the universe...
SHUT UP, is this even poetry? 
I know not. 
You could call it Prose.

An argument of faith, of belief, that's it. 
Not of God.
Believe in heaven and a hell like the Judeo-christian. 
Or a follower of Muhammad  
Or maybe the Buddhist wanting to attain enlightenment!  
An argument on God is like a comic show of imposed punishment! 

God exists not in some distance far away place, God is right here with the whole humanity,
Silently wantin'. Watchin' & lovin' man's ignorance of esteemed credibility.
Looking for a God? looking out for God.
So what!

© 2013 dicey jones


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Thank you for appreciating the criticism. So many people don't take criticism well. I would be glad to answer any questions you have about punctuation etc. before you post.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Do the random initial caps mean anything, or are they carelessness? You cap "View" and "Punishment" but not "Heaven" or "Hell" or "Bible" which are capped as proper nouns. Poem uses "thee," which sounds formal, but reduces to slang as it closes. There are many grammar mistakes (the Judeo-christian {sic} bible say." And surely you don't mean following Qmran, which was the community related to the Dead Sea Scrolls. I think you mean Koran, which is is variously transliterated from the Arabic with a Q, but never this way.

Posted 11 Years Ago


dicey jones

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the corrections, It figures, I am more of a careless writer... the mistakes were obviousl.. read more

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