The land we live on

It is about who made this land. Who gave us oceans and lakes? the sun and the moon?

Look at the oceans and seas

Can't you see them through the breeze

 

The sun and moon work hard to give us light

When we look around it is so bright

 

I wonder who made this land

so we can have all this sand

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