Together

Together

A Poem by Aekmy

 

The clouds are rolling in, and my youth is showing skin.

Rain splashes across your face as we twirl in this place.

 

Ballerinas and puppets can’t save us now,

But if we run to Vegas I’ll scream our vows.

 

Pre:

It's taken me so long to build this trust, so long to endure, to realize that...

 

Chorus:

With your hand in mine we can accomplish anything

Boats and stars aid in our escape,

Can you imagine getting anything but away?

 

My hair is in your hands as the radio spit music from bands

Life is slowing to a sixty, but we’re rolling on anyway.

 

Chorus:

With your hand in mine we can accomplish anything

Boats and stars aid in our escape,

Can you imagine getting anything but away?

 

Pre:

It's taken me so long to build this trust, so long to endure, to realize that...

 

With your hand in mine we can accomplished everything.

Boats and stars helped us get gone,

Can you believe we finally got away?

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Aekmy


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Really pretty, lovely.
I like it a lot.
I love the ending; "Can you believe we finally got away?"



Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes that was nice,really nice and a lovely song..
Clouds running ,my youth showing
Took me long to build this trust
Your hands in mine we get away
boats and stars are our escape
this is lovely dreamy write,i so much loved it
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the upbeat in this... lyrics? Love is the best emotion anyone can experience as wrote this work with pure delight. I enjoyed your work. ks

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cool Beans! What a great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem/song

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. There's a sense of yearning and escape and urgency that's written quite well. This song actually reminds me of "Because The Night", both Patti Smith and the 10,000 Maniacs version, which just like your piece wonderfully encapsulates that feeling. Is there a melody to this?

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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