Rabbit Hole

I rub against his chest

Nuzzling my face into

His neck, breathing,

Breathing in the safety

And loving the new home

That I have found in his arms;

 

He is my angel for now,

Red eyes and kisses for the day;

 

For his smile coaxes mine to

Reply, for his eyes latch onto

My blue ones and make them

 

Prisoner

 

And I find myself swirling,

Twirling, upside down and

Suddenly right side up;

 

Falling down into my own

Dark rabbit hole, and

Emerging in his arms

Author's Note

Any comments or constructive criticism are welcome.

Reviews

[Alice]

This is amazing.
I wish that there were more a story of the fall though.
And once you are back, in his arms... what then? Normality or is everything different? Or was it weird all along? There is so much more to this story. This is an amazing seed from which I am sure an amazing poem will bloom. Keep working at this one.

[Alphachad]

Awesome. It was cute and sweet, then dark and whoa - "in his arms". Lovely piece. Oh and thanks for your comments too i hope you have a good day :D

[Praiser]

VERY GOOD

[Steve]

Very sweet!