think of me

think of me

A Poem by aftervision
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life

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Think of Me

 

Think of me

While you're thinking of you

Think of me

Because I'm half of two

Think of me

And that what I want is important

Think of me

Your so-called subordinate

Think of me

Before you make plans for us

Think of me

When your eyes are filled with lust

Think of me

The one that cries out for affection

Think of me

The one that searched for direction

Think of me

And the beauty that's being contained

Think of me

If you want our love to remain

Think of me

I say before it's to late

Think of me

Before you seal your fate

Think of me

 

After vision

 

 

© 2010 aftervision


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i loved the repitions.how they set up the stage and the content reminds me of sylvia plath's Abominitions.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like the format of this, it's written very nicely.

Think of me
I say before it's to late
Think of me
Before you seal your fate

That is my favorite part.



Posted 13 Years Ago


This is like talking to some aspects as part of the collective being. The title is exactly the same words I would tell me and myself. This is just brilliant! Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful I really enjoyed this write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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