A Dream of Love

a collaboration with Matthew Carter... mine is blue, his in red

 

 

 

Take me to a dream like state...

Eyes shut, mind wide awake, sweet lady won’t you come and play?

Take my hand, don’t let go, let us fly through the clouds and sky

We arrive now, even higher now, the time is us now

Together we go through time and through distance as if it stands still

Walking in the silver mist of green hill, our spiritual bind turning the old and making time new

To a place in celestial swirls where there is no pain, no hurting, just the love and joy of us together

When a moment shared can last forever, where the birds will sing, and we will dance and learn as one together

For in dreams, all is real and we can be together without the constraints of this world

The boundaries of flesh overcome, we swim inside love and journey far throughout the divine and of ourselves

We become one within this love, the purity of the joy that it brings

The truth in intention just sets us free, we breathe in the heavens, the view and the beauty of the euphoria walking us in ecstasy

For in this dream state, anything and everything is forever possible.

 

 

Author's Note

this is my first collaboration...what do you think?

Reviews

[Corey Lunare-]

For in this dream state, anything and everything is forever possible. yes this is true and what a great ending line! I am no poet and henceforth do not know what a collaboration is, i know its when two things come together for a common goal, if u want a disctionary definition. Neways I love this peice because it shows so well. If dreams could be reality what a world we would live in. It ould be nice and dreams relieve us of all our earthly worries. Neways, great job on this piece Amanda and i will be back to read more i am sure!

[Michael X]

Wow amanda, this is awsomely similar to my own poem, #7, and to think you wrote it
as a collab, perhaps a collab with your twin flame, caturing the celestial thought
and wonder, such beautiful, soulfully spoken romance, I loved it, beautifully done.

[Tara Jean Olson]

so enchanting....

[Rain]

Terrific for a first shot at it. You both seemed to meld together. I'd say congrats to both of you. Rain..

[Natasha Ashway]

Nice read.
Thanks for sharing!

[Steffi]

I love combining my work with another artist.
Great collaboration your styles mixed very well with each other.

Good write

I loved your words. This poem is great! I think for your first collaboration it is very good!

[April Child]

For in this dream state, anything and everything is forever possible.

Lovely.

You fit together very nicely, or I should say your words do :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Great work, kudos to you both.

[forfila]

Thank you for working with me on this Amanda,, it was a pleasure to work with you =)

[Barbara Walker]

This is a great "New Age" poem, whoever gave it that name knew we'd never had anything like it before. Celestial beings and all encompassing love. I'll go with New Age anytime! Great writing! Barbara