Dreams of Love

Dreams of Love

A Poem by Amanda
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a collaboration with The Lost Rose

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Dreams of Love

 

I want to be wrapped

In your arms forever

And dream the dreams of love.

You captured my heart,

Enlightened my soul

With your kind and gentle ways.

 

You should exist between my arms

And the faithful beats of my heart

Eternity is not long enough, my love,

To enjoy in the gift of

Waking up next to God’s

Greatest creation.

 

The love we share deepens

With each passing day,

Experiencing each moment spent

Glorying in the soft glowing light

Content with being together

Though we are far apart.

 

“For You, My Love”

“I Will Be Your Shelter”

Because you are now my “Heart & Soul”

I will continue to pray nightly

That I become the next inspiration,

For your love poem.

 

You are always in my thoughts,

My inspiration with love

Soothing my fears of the past,

Helping me become what

I am meant to be,

A better, much stronger me.

 

What matters most

Is that you feel secure,

You feel adored

And that you understand

I want you for every tomorrow

There is to come.

 

With you I want to be,

Your fantasy embodied…

Together, heart and mind,

Body and soul…fulfilled

Letting the magic of our eternal light

Shine brilliantly…

 

Our vows written poetically in sync

Sends me mentally

To the end of my fantasies

With us becoming God’s chosen

Dream of LOVE.

 

A collaborative poem by Amanda and The Lost Rose

1/28/09

 


© 2009 Amanda



Author's Note

Amanda
this is our first collaborative poem...thank you so much, TLR, it was an honor working with you on this....tell me what ya'll think. AT

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What matters most
"For You, My Love"
"I Will Be Your Shelter"
Because you are now my "Heart & Soul"
I will continue to pray nightly
That I become the next inspiration,
For your love poem.

Is that you feel secure,
You feel adored
And that you understand
I want you for every tomorrow
There is to come.

What a beautifully inspired poem. The two of you work really well together. It is as if it is one voice. If only...I could believe in love like this again.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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every couple who really are in love can eeasily relate to it...master piece....nice work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


I really enjoyed the collaboration here an excellent harmonic work for you two keep it up.
This was sensual and also very emotional true for true love and deep love of the heart!
I really liked the flow and wording in placement here..great job to the both of you I hope to read more from your collaborations.

Lasla

Posted 8 Years Ago


I am not certain WOW is enough. this was a perfect, image inspiring piece that made me smile in reflection and dream. it produced vivid images and emotion. Great Job!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh my!
This is a real tear jerker!
I love it! Great job you two!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I find this piece.. Magical.. in every way... the wording is excelente. Y Fabuloso!.. aww! every word!

Posted 8 Years Ago


A beautiful collaboration of pens and hearts.

Blessing,
Lesa

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very sweet, romantic, descriptive. I liked reading this - really cute. =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ok this is a good one and it is well written. I dunno, I think it could be slightly shorter and a bit more concise and I would like to see more specific examples of the love because, I feel bad saying this but at some moments I kind of felt like it was a love poem I read before. But anyway, good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


THAT WAS AMAAAAZZING!! so passionate! so romantic! so....beautiful! I absolutely adored that! seriously...great work!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful colllaboration........Its fits really well together.

Its always a wonderful experience to be in love with someone and have them share that same feeling. The emotions are intense and you see nothing but each other. This piece made my heart flutter to realize that there are still people who see so much more of the positives of a relationship.

Great Piece

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

Posted 8 Years Ago



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