Dreams of Love

Dreams of Love

A Poem by Amanda
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a collaboration with The Lost Rose

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Dreams of Love

 

I want to be wrapped

In your arms forever

And dream the dreams of love.

You captured my heart,

Enlightened my soul

With your kind and gentle ways.

 

You should exist between my arms

And the faithful beats of my heart

Eternity is not long enough, my love,

To enjoy in the gift of

Waking up next to God’s

Greatest creation.

 

The love we share deepens

With each passing day,

Experiencing each moment spent

Glorying in the soft glowing light

Content with being together

Though we are far apart.

 

“For You, My Love”

“I Will Be Your Shelter”

Because you are now my “Heart & Soul”

I will continue to pray nightly

That I become the next inspiration,

For your love poem.

 

You are always in my thoughts,

My inspiration with love

Soothing my fears of the past,

Helping me become what

I am meant to be,

A better, much stronger me.

 

What matters most

Is that you feel secure,

You feel adored

And that you understand

I want you for every tomorrow

There is to come.

 

With you I want to be,

Your fantasy embodied…

Together, heart and mind,

Body and soul…fulfilled

Letting the magic of our eternal light

Shine brilliantly…

 

Our vows written poetically in sync

Sends me mentally

To the end of my fantasies

With us becoming God’s chosen

Dream of LOVE.

 

A collaborative poem by Amanda and The Lost Rose

1/28/09

 

© 2009 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
this is our first collaborative poem...thank you so much, TLR, it was an honor working with you on this....tell me what ya'll think. AT

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What matters most
"For You, My Love"
"I Will Be Your Shelter"
Because you are now my "Heart & Soul"
I will continue to pray nightly
That I become the next inspiration,
For your love poem.

Is that you feel secure,
You feel adored
And that you understand
I want you for every tomorrow
There is to come.

What a beautifully inspired poem. The two of you work really well together. It is as if it is one voice. If only...I could believe in love like this again.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Strong and beautiful imagery. Lovely work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is enchanting. Such love many long for is really captured here. Truly divine. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 15 Years Ago


A wonderful beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

ic an't wait for our colab Lost Rose!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Dear Amanda (and THE LOST ROSE),

This was a wonderful and passionate poem. Kudos.

Amanda, I am not as familiar with your work as with TLR's poetry. But I can see influences here that must be yours. I see TLR's influence as well. It seems this is a very productive collaboration. Wonderful that you two are working together.

I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was a wonderful collaboration. It flowed so well that you can truely see how well the two of you combined so well together. It was splendidly written.
Great Collaboration you two =D

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I love this getting together of minds; my wife and I do it too. I say, "Well what should I say here?". and she gives me her input. Thanks for sharing, charly

Posted 15 Years Ago


I loved it! We all dream of love! It is something we all want! Great job! Loved it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow!! this doesnt look like a poem written by two different poets.. nice flow and nice sync.. my fav. part was:

"You are always in my thoughts,
My inspiration with love
Soothing my fears of the past,
Helping me become what
I am meant to be,
A better, much stronger me."

something we all look for in the "love of our life"....
very well crafted! :)

Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oo... very beautiful piece you've written here. The imagery of being in arms really caught my attention, as well as these lines
"Soothing my fears of the past,

Helping me become what

I am meant to be,

A better, much stronger me."
Very honest a true. Great read and write! Thanks :)

-Austin

Posted 15 Years Ago


A lovely collaboration of two hearts and minds like two streams that flow into the one river of Love. Thank you TLR for asking me to read and to you both for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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