Dreams of Love

Dreams of Love

A Poem by Amanda
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a collaboration with The Lost Rose

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Dreams of Love

 

I want to be wrapped

In your arms forever

And dream the dreams of love.

You captured my heart,

Enlightened my soul

With your kind and gentle ways.

 

You should exist between my arms

And the faithful beats of my heart

Eternity is not long enough, my love,

To enjoy in the gift of

Waking up next to God’s

Greatest creation.

 

The love we share deepens

With each passing day,

Experiencing each moment spent

Glorying in the soft glowing light

Content with being together

Though we are far apart.

 

“For You, My Love”

“I Will Be Your Shelter”

Because you are now my “Heart & Soul”

I will continue to pray nightly

That I become the next inspiration,

For your love poem.

 

You are always in my thoughts,

My inspiration with love

Soothing my fears of the past,

Helping me become what

I am meant to be,

A better, much stronger me.

 

What matters most

Is that you feel secure,

You feel adored

And that you understand

I want you for every tomorrow

There is to come.

 

With you I want to be,

Your fantasy embodied…

Together, heart and mind,

Body and soul…fulfilled

Letting the magic of our eternal light

Shine brilliantly…

 

Our vows written poetically in sync

Sends me mentally

To the end of my fantasies

With us becoming God’s chosen

Dream of LOVE.

 

A collaborative poem by Amanda and The Lost Rose

1/28/09

 

© 2009 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
this is our first collaborative poem...thank you so much, TLR, it was an honor working with you on this....tell me what ya'll think. AT

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What matters most
"For You, My Love"
"I Will Be Your Shelter"
Because you are now my "Heart & Soul"
I will continue to pray nightly
That I become the next inspiration,
For your love poem.

Is that you feel secure,
You feel adored
And that you understand
I want you for every tomorrow
There is to come.

What a beautifully inspired poem. The two of you work really well together. It is as if it is one voice. If only...I could believe in love like this again.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a gorgeous poem. You two did such a great job together. It flowed beautifully. I agree with Angela everyone longs for this kind love and passion. Astoundingly beautiful!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


a beautifully written poem... it brings tears of joy and happiness to my heart, where there has been sadness and pain...
keep up the wonderful work..

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is beautiful. well written, the flow is silky smooth. everyone longs for this kind of love, passion. it grabs you by the heart. a gorgeous collaboration.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Deeply devoted. I like the flow of it and the feel it produces. Well done you two.

Posted 15 Years Ago


wonderfully expressed.
what a love poem should be :)

Faith, Hope, Love 4 the future.


Posted 15 Years Ago


This poem is fluid. I agree with so many others that said you can't tell where one voice begins or the other ends. Nice collabo. I hope to see more of these works maybe with each other or other artists on this site.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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"For You, My Love"
"I Will Be Your Shelter"

I enjoyed it
Great collaboration...

Thanks for sharing...



Posted 15 Years Ago


Hello Amanda, after stepping away from this piece for 3 days and coming back to it today I really enjoyed the experience of collab with you. The poem came out really well. I never planned to collab with anyone on this site because I am in such awe with the talent that I thought I would show up as the weak link. Your words, soul and encouragement helped me through this process and I thank you again. You are an amazing writer.

Posted 15 Years Ago


So sweet.....Like Sonny & Cher or Beyonce' & Jay-Z, you two come together and design a beautiful love poem that's very touching. Keep the collabs coming!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow! What a beautiful piece of writing it is...
Words are flowing is this poem so effortlessly!
"For You, My Love"

"I Will Be Your Shelter"

I loved these lines the most!
Great piece of writing :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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