Rain

simple poem

Rain ,a messenger of lord,

pervade prosperity in the land of God.

Rain, the tears of soul,

wash away the sin of all.

Rain , the sign of happiness,

vanishes the sadness.

Rain , the blessing of ancestral,

makes us brighter.

Author's Note

i am a beginner.. u r free to criticise

Reviews

[Tosca66]

I really like the tone, rhyme and sweetness in your writing

[Zoya]

thanks

[Chris]

All through the world, people dance in the rain and feel cleansed by it... you touched on a universal thought.

[Zoya]

thank you very much.... :)

[Akshat♥]

i love rain...i like to feel every touch of rain drops..
nicely written poem :)
Keep writing!!

[writ rajat]

fantastic poem i liked this

[Zoya]

thank u very much

[Marc]

Well done. Usually rain is sad, but it's also the source of life.

[Zoya]

:)

[Edward]

the positive side to rain is shown in this piece. Great work :)

[Zoya]

:)

[zainul]

Adore your lovely thought.
Sounds like the song of rain.

[Zoya]

thnaks

[zainul]

:)

[junaid altaf]

to the point, conclusive.......

[Zoya]

thnks

[Just Kim]

I believe in all said, sometimes rain can be a sense of sadness as well,
But I like your take, the positive side of Rain, Without rain we can't grow.
I sincerely like this write.

[Zoya]

:)