To the One I will Never Have

To the One I will Never Have

A Poem by madamoiselleecho

For you, the one who I will never have,
Because you do not want to give us chance,
No matter how we feel the same love,
When together, we can both sing, laugh, dance.

We can be good, and yes, we can be great,
For our souls were intertwined before we're born,
But without me, you choose to live your fate,
You broke up the promise we both have sworn.

You prefer to live behind the shadows,
Believed that I'm  not the one that you deserve,
Says I'm too much as my success bestows,
How's life, when  you have my heart to reserve.

Hopefully, not late, one day, may I add,
You'd re'lize, I'm the one you never had.

© 2016 madamoiselleecho


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Hi! Upon reading your work, I can sense familiarity with mine. Both loved each other but one decided to move away. Sad, but as they say, if you both are meant for each other fate will find a way.:)


We can be good, and yes, we can be great,
For our souls were intertwined before we're born,
But without me, you choose to live your fate,
You broke up the promise we both have sworn.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

madamoiselleecho

7 Years Ago

Thank you kurohana! I appreciate it so much



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Hi! Upon reading your work, I can sense familiarity with mine. Both loved each other but one decided to move away. Sad, but as they say, if you both are meant for each other fate will find a way.:)


We can be good, and yes, we can be great,
For our souls were intertwined before we're born,
But without me, you choose to live your fate,
You broke up the promise we both have sworn.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

madamoiselleecho

7 Years Ago

Thank you kurohana! I appreciate it so much

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Added on September 5, 2016
Last Updated on September 13, 2016
Tags: insecurity, pride, realization, regret, love, broken, success

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Makati, National Capital Region, Philippines



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