On The Canvas..by Michael

An image of loneliness paints a sad picture.

However, a new canvas is available with a fresh

Set of colors. Ponder not on what has been done before,

But create a new scene in your mind and heart.

The brush will then stroke those ideas on the canvas of

Life to be...

 

 

 

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Author's Note

See my 17 published books of short stories on my web site www.michaelreisman.net

Reviews

[Raven's Soul]

I liked this. It was short and to the point, which was cool. I didn't notice anything wrong with it concerning SPAG mistakes. Overall, good job on it. The sole change I would, simply due to my own personal writing style, is that I would have written the poem in a column rather than a paragraph format, but that's simply my personal preference when it comes to writing poetry. The poem itself conjured images of depression and sadness within me and, at same time, managed to cheer me as well through the last couple lines. It gives a sense that, although things may have been bad and down right lonely before in the past, so long as I work hard and keep trying, things will get better and every day is a new canvas on which I can apply the colors I've got in my bag and see what happens. Thank you for sharing this piece. I appreciated it. Happy writing, sir.

[Michael Reisman]

Thank you for this beautiful compliment.

[Lover of loveliness]

Thankyou for those words...let us be brave and let the strokes of the brush become our reality.

[Michael Reisman]

Welcome and I agree 100%

[The Black Warrior]

I like this poem a lot very eloquent, with great imagery.

Thank you for sharing

~Suk

[Michael Reisman]

Thank you so much Suk...You have beautiful insight.

[The Black Warrior]

You are very welcome Michael

[Taylorgwebb]

Though eloquent, with strong imagery and a good message, I have never found totally free-form poetry to be engaging.

[Michael Reisman]

Thank you kind sir for enjoying this.