Dissapointed

about a heartbreak with someone i shouldn't have fell for in the first place

Heartbreak

All anyone does is shake

They act like they're grown

you waited for me to wake

laid up next to me 

i thought you weren't a fake

i've figured out that we meant nothing

i guess we were just another mistake

i do wish i didn't fall for you

my heart you overtake

i fell deeper and deeper in love with you

it felt like the world worked for you

my heart it sacrificed in the process

you were supposed to be my boo

when you decided to do more than be my best friend

we were meant to be, we were the powerful two

a duo, we worked together

my deepest thoughts went to you

i never expressed myself to a human like that before

i gave you a piece of my soul

you used it for your own good

i made a commitment to you, more of a goal

it was gonna work out for us but he didn't think it through

when i was alone in bed, my mind fell in a hellhole

i never thought it'd end this way but you changed on me

you left with you still in control

how can that be?

i always took care of my pride

i finally went out of my way to show my real colors

i never once lied

i told him all there was to life

once he told me we weren't mean to be, in large amounts i cried

a part of me told me that i should've kept my feelings to myself

i got used by the guy on my bedside

i became a wreck shortafter

i think a piece of me the day he told me we weren't meant to be died

i don't think it'll come back

maybe it's all part of growing..

Author's Note

i'm just beginning to really write, any opinions and criticism would be appreciated. Didn't know whether to categorize as lyrical or poetry..

Reviews

[notreallyawriter]

Focus less on trying to rhyme and more on the piece as a whole. It's very good but it loses flow if things rhyme too perfectly.

[Ajla]

gotcha, thank youu