Chained to the Void

Chained to the Void

A Poem by aj milton
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My words - your interpretation..... My first ever poem (since infant school!)

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You were designed by logic

I was created by emotion

Your joy is numbers, mine is words

Your world is black and white

Mine a pallet of possibilities

You are active and gregarious

I was relaxed and centred

 

Opposites attract and so we did

North and South slam together, hard to break

I could not stay away from your burning candle, consumed, aglow

Love is blind, intertwined, all joined, ecstasy, two become one and yet more

You made me whole, you helped me grow

You eased my ache

 

But that was then, another time, same place

Harmony dissolved and out of synch

And now I am worthless, oft ignored, no value, just a scoreboard

My heart still chained to an empty void

All is missing, I cannot break the link


© 2017 aj milton



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aj milton,
This poem is a testament to the truth of the saying: "Opposites attract." She, a person, "active and gregarious," of "black and white" and "her joy in numbers."
You, "created by emotions," and a "pallet of possibilities," and "words," "relaxed and centered."
I see the lovly influence of this person: "you made me whole, you helped me grow
you eased my ache."
Life does continue on and hopefully the human heart and soul, in time find meaning and lessons learned. Letting go is a matter of steps forward and it is difficult but oh so necessary.
Please know that you will and are growing and becoming everyday as I hope your now gone loved one is as well.
Blessings,
Kathy





Posted 1 Week Ago


aj milton

1 Week Ago

Thanks for your comments
My heart still chained to an empty void
All is missing, I cannot break the link

it has a nice flow :) your poem is not as sizzling as your stories lol .. but this is more relatable..



Posted 3 Months Ago


aj milton

3 Months Ago

Thanks! writing gives me catharsis two different ways. The stories are escapism and the poems are pe.. read more
Galadriel

3 Months Ago

true :) i so agree with that...
poems i too feel are very personal..
That is just the way it is sometimes I am afraid. I am also truly glad to have stumbled upon these words of yours aj milton there is something a little special here....

Posted 3 Months Ago


WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
I loved this. It has a wonderful flow, and carried me along. By the end I could feel the sadness of that last stanza. Nicely done.

~Luna

Posted 3 Months Ago


aj milton

3 Months Ago

Thank you !
Just a scoreboard... I felt like I was reading footnotes of my past... This hits hard to home, and the reality is... Black and white possibilities upon a stage of relaxed simplicity... Well... I do not the reality, but this was good, aha... Deeply penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


aj milton

3 Months Ago

Thanks for your empathy!
Silente

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the journey... Truly...
Really loved this! On thing that slightly confused me was the combination of past and present tense in the first two stanzas before revealing that the relationship is in the past. If intentional then totally ignore this! Anyway very much enjoyed reading it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


aj milton

3 Months Ago

Thanks! glad you liked it. Yes the tense changes are sort of intentional to show my state of mind ch.. read more
mae23

3 Months Ago

Okay! Then I think it works!
Loved the middle bit great work

Posted 4 Months Ago


aj milton

4 Months Ago

Thanks. Those were those perfect times when love and passion conquers all
Beautifully written! You have a very unique way with words!

Posted 4 Months Ago


aj milton

4 Months Ago

Velia, thanks. This one was fueled by raw emotion.
Opposite do attract. Always tempting to test unknown territory.
"My heart still chained to an empty void
All is missing, I cannot break the link"
Sometime we want what we cannot have. I do understand the above lines. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


aj milton

4 Months Ago

Thanks, for a non-poet I'm amazed by, and appreciative of everybody's positive comments. I'm almost .. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are doing well and you are welcome.
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Zoe
Ah, true, I believe...opposites attract. How you started from the very beginning of the love story, ending on a sad note...when something or the other goes out of control...and then, there is loss...hearts break. Very well written!

Posted 4 Months Ago


aj milton

4 Months Ago

Thank you.
Zoe

4 Months Ago

No problem

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aj milton
aj milton

Hampshire, United Kingdom



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