When the Wave Crashes

When the Wave Crashes

A Poem by étoile
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A poem about my experience in having anxiety.

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My heart trembles and shakes
Not able to rid of this horrid taste
Dipped in poison
My thoughts seize
Almost frozen
Quivering with fear
The process plays by ear
My feet stand in place 
Is this my fate?
A flutter in my chest  
Can't my brain go to rest 
Feeling trapped in a frenzy
Other people's minds I envy
Wishing for it to end
There's a pounding in my head
It's saying I'm hanging by a thread
My breathing calms down
Is it over now?
The tears on my face start to dry
I look a mess
But at least I'm fine

© 2018 étoile


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I read this because my grandson suffers with anxiety and panic attacks, and you have described well in your poem the avalanche of emotions you go through when having a panic attack. They may not last long, but for the person suffering it's like going to hell and back. When it happens for the first time, you think you are going to die, but then you almost start to get used to them and know you will pull through. Being creative and expressing your feelings will help, anything creative will help. I wish you well. This is well written.

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I read this because my grandson suffers with anxiety and panic attacks, and you have described well in your poem the avalanche of emotions you go through when having a panic attack. They may not last long, but for the person suffering it's like going to hell and back. When it happens for the first time, you think you are going to die, but then you almost start to get used to them and know you will pull through. Being creative and expressing your feelings will help, anything creative will help. I wish you well. This is well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 24, 2018
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