after death

after death

A Poem by Akshita

                          AFTER DEATH
                  
         God welcomes you in his heaven,
           and his angels are serving you,
           as you had served others with honesty
            and integrity........
  

© 2013 Akshita


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are we serving with honesty and integrity?
But.. its really good...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice one Akshita...plain words..nice picture associated keep writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice poem who cares about the little mistake it adds to the character of the piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Second line under the picture...I think your "a" wandered off on you. Should be "and Hntis angels" (always capitalize the pronoun when it refers to God).
Fantastic message of hope! And I love the picture. Altogether, a beautiful piece.
Thank you for sharing it with me!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very Nice :) Love the photo just check spelling :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


And his angels.
served others.

Lovely photo and poetry...did a little edit for you at the top...Rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshita
Akshita

ajmer, rajsthan, India



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