Gather Me

Gather Me

A Poem by Alka

If pain were to have a colour,

Will colour it grey..

Unsure, obscure and yet turbulent

The cold touch , the distant feel and the same old lone me

The wet pillow and the clean bed

tells me you were once there

The grey spreads again in  my mind and soul

Think should let it be there forever

© 2016 Alka



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nice, is it a coincidence that you said it spreads in your mind, which is made by your brain and your brain is grey, and more grey matter(to a certain point) makes you smarter?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Alka

1 Year Ago

To me it was the gloom which spread...and the hurt makes me wary of my actions
DRAGO

1 Year Ago

Yes, I see...
I could really feel all of the meaning in this piece. It's very strong and invokes a lot of thought, which is what most people try to do if they are writing poetry. I think the wording might be off in the phrases "will colour it grey" or "think should let it be there forever", but that might be because I just don't get what you meant or maybe you did it for artistic purpose. I still understood the message you were trying to convey, though. Great job! Welcome to the site!

Posted 1 Year Ago


DRAGO

1 Year Ago

do you see words with colors, because I kindof do
Alka

1 Year Ago

At times I do
DRAGO

1 Year Ago

cool__________

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Alka
Alka

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Hi I am a dreamer and I live in Mumbai .. in search of life and what it stands for.. am here to share some of my work and get honest opinions on them as well as make friends with like minded peopl.. more..

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