Hotel Room

Hotel Room

A Poem by ~amanda~
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I don't know what inspired this...

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Your poems live inside me.
They ebb and flow like the tide.
Turning my every thought to you.
I see my name on every page you write.
Maybe its not supposed to be my name on your lips.
But I imagine it there anyway.
I imagine me in your hotel room.
Fending off your loneliness and pain.
I see me kissing you.
Touching you,
in ways that only a lonely  hotel room can accommodate.
The silence waits for you,
to make or break it.
While I wait for you to make or break me.
Loving you. Wanting you.
In your lonely old  hotel room.
 


© 2009 ~amanda~



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Now this could be taken in so many contexts... the lonely hotel room is what? His heart... his mind... his soul! So many questions... great to ponder something like this and search for our own truths within... after all that is what this is all about... the search...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderful beginning..
Your poems live inside me.
They ebb and flow like the tide.
Turning my every thought to you.
Very sensuous & flowy
Kudos Amanda
LeeLee

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this emotion in here. There is a longing, and a desire to make someone feel love that is in need of it. You did a nice job on this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


"Maybe its not supposed to be my name on your lips.
But I imagine it there anyway. "

I really like that part.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good poem. Strange how places remind us of people and the story or rather poem that inspires itself from a heartache or longing from a simple memory of a hotel room. Thanks for sharing. kinda sad tho not romantic...

~~Pfluffer (Butch)

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like itttt! :)
flows well and it reminded me of a quote: "don't make someone a priority when they make you an option"
good write overall!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Romantic in a sweet simple way. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


You captured the feeling, now that's good poetry. Enjoyed ty PS

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not sure what inspired it but might I say fabulous... I see someone feeling like they are a hotel room, only there for the convenience of another.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow...I love this write, babe. :) I can't say anything bad whatsoever about it.

By the way, you should drop me a line...I haven't heard from you in forever.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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