Wouldn't It Be Fun

Humans try so hard to give everything explanation. Sometimes it's okay to enjoy the mystery.

Wouldn’t it be fun,

So magical,

To look to the sky

And think,

“That big yellow light, is that God?”

And it would be okay

If we never found out.

Reviews

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Haha..Yes!!
Though the lines are ample, there is a lot of wisdom in them.

[Alene Parr]

Thank you very much for reading and for the nice words! Cheers!

[max_vonnegut]

"And it would be okay If we never fount out." That's is brilliant, you're so freaking good!

[Alene Parr]

Wow, thank you so much. For both of your reviews. Holy, my head is getting bigger. Haha. Thanks so much for reading! Cheers! oxo

[max_vonnegut]

Hahahah!! You're welcome :)

[My Favorite Writer !]

Nice thought ! Although, I don't intend to ruin the fun..still I can't stop my self saying that..in a way or another it is GOD for us (humans). I know I'm blending Scientific approach with literature.. but it is a fact..We all are dependent on it for light, food, water, and almost everything we could imagine..Ohh no..I know how to start saying something...But, I don't know how to stop..
I must say..it is quite profound thought !

[Alene Parr]

This is a good point. Thanks for sharing! And for reading! Cheers!

[brnagn51]

Interesting idea. I often look to the stars and thank the one who made them.

[Alene Parr]

I think it's a great thing to look to the stars and be absorbed in their beauty. Everyone should do it more often. Thanks for reading!

[wordman]

what if it was an alien ship just waiting to swoop down and pick us all up
and take us out to dinner hell i`m getting my tux on now yu know i`m in colorado and i have my legal pot can you tell lol

[Alene Parr]

Haha! Just take a little spin around the universe. Thanks for reading!

[Marie]

I think people did do that once. And they never found out.

[Alene Parr]

Haha, I think they did too. And I think it would be a lot more interesting to think that way. Thank you for reading. :)

[Matt DeFranco]

Short and powerful. Great job!

[Alene Parr]

Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[Delmar Cooper]

Yes, it would be perfect.

[Alene Parr]

Thanks for reading. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Keep it magical and don't take the fun out of it...A good pen upon this write...:)

[Alene Parr]

Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................