Fly Away, My Dear

Fly Away, My Dear

A Poem by Sincerely, Alex
"

Don't give up and look through my eyes.

"

Fly Away, My Dear.

 

You fold up your dreams like paper,

You don’t even give them the chance to fly.

Your fears delude you, you can’t see how irresistible you are.

Don’t try knocking on a hollow tree,

All you listen to are the echoes you wish to escape.

You speak of sweet sorrows.

And look at decay and refusals of love.

But you don’t see.

So please, see me.

Talk, don’t just speak.

Hear, don’t listen.

Inhale, don’t just breathe.

Feel, don’t just touch.

Grasp, don’t just hold.

Hope - don’t run away.


© 2011 Sincerely, Alex



Author's Note

Sincerely, Alex
Well...yeah. It is crappy but...what I want to say to people sometimes...

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"All you listen to are the echoes you wish to escape." Great line and image! I feel like you could add more to this, it seems as though you have lots to say on the topic.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this captures some feelings I have about a recently dissolved relationship quite well. you write beautifully and gracefully.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SO TRUE the last 6 lines simply say it all : )
This is so wonderful, and truthful.
You're a wonderful writer.
This isn't crappy don't say that,
I found it wonderful and truthful.
Believe in yourself like your write says.
Awesome job!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 20, 2011
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Tags: Fly, Away, My Dear, Hope, Love

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