Never Ending

this dialogue in my head is continual

endless,

strung together with heartbroken sleeves

torn from the karma

twice removed.

emotionless

objective

memories surface

powder puff imagery

I can barely see

and yet, you are there

you are there always

front and center

silent in the front row,

do you remember me...

Reviews

[Hi]

This does get the point across. It could serve well to connect the beginning to the end like you are speaking an Aside in a play.

[Alisa Js]

Thanks Matt,

Sometimes there are those certain ones you can't help but wonder how it would have worked out.

If only...

You know what I mean?

Alisa :-)

[Hi]

The urge can be strong.

[Alisa Js]

Thanks Laura!

[Little Whisper]

"Silent in the front row"
The first time I read this and again now... this line holds my attention. ( I can almost hear the silence calling to you ) .... and in that I know you are remembered.

Wonderful write. :)

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Sami

[Sami Khalil]

you are there always

front and center

silent in the front row,
A powerful write. Thank you for penning...:)

[Alisa Js]

Thank you!

[.]

powerful words........i liked = loved all these words that you've used here........i loved this below one stanza......

objective
memories surface
powder puff imagery
I can barely see
and yet, you are there
you are there always
front and center........

Ahhhhhh.......loved your these words....impactful.........

[Alisa Js]

Thank you both very much for your kind comments!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i would remember you, yes,

love the "heartbroken sleeves torn from karma"---

quite a couple lines...

my never ending thoughts of you fill my head...and they will never go away.

[.]

~ the reason why i read you... and love to read you... can best be described as 'pure selfishness'... when i read your words, i feel like you wrote my heart out... i know the feeling you speak of in this piece so well... that sometimes i think i might just self-erase from feeling it... ~ this is a brilliantly expressive piece of writing... with a more than perfect closing line... so very insightful...