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Enchantment

Enchantment

A Poem by Alisa Js

there is a place for us
always here,
between each heartbeat
next to every sigh

your eyes do not lie
and mine,
they will forever be 
enchanted...

© 2016 Alisa Js


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This is enchanting so the title is a good one. It is concise, but leads to much more. I like "between each heartbeat" and have used similar metaphor. Thanks Alisa. Funny, I noticed I reviewed this one. Well, I will leave it anyway. I like this review too, but my memory I will have to check. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This is simply sweet. Thanks.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Hello Matt,

You're most welcome and thank you for stopping by. I will be by soon.read more
You paint love in such beautiful hues Alisa. The codependence that is not an addiction but an unspoken yearning in true lovers is writ large here.
Super concentrate of love here...


Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Thank you, kind one...

Wishing you a happy holiday season and a fabulous New Year!!! .. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Ditto Alisa - with bells - slieghbell on...
(hugs)
Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Thanks...

I have a question. Are you from the UK? Meaning, were you born there? If so.. read more
sensually passionate, & romantically innocent write it is. u always get urself licked in very deep threads of Cummins words. great work, as always.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments and time. I am a fan of ee cummings, but I take it you knew that alrea.. read more
Adam Adams

7 Years Ago

ah.. E. E cunning? wow. me too even a biggest fan of "Cummings".. and i guess, u already knew thi.. read more
Very well done. Short but tells a good story.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Ted... I will be by soon.

Alisa
Your words paint such an intimate portrait of what every heart and soul so desperately seeks, yearns to feel, that special soul in their life that completes them. Sweeping the reader a realm of serenity, saturated with warmth, love, acceptance...the line that stands out to me is :Your eyes don't lie"...eyes say all...it's a gateway to one's soul really..amazing as always...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aloha serah,

Ah yes, it is...may the spell never be broken.

Wishing you well.

Alisa

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you j... I am flattered.

Will drop by soon.

Alisa

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aloha Tori and thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


~ i love this infinitely poetic definition of togetherness, dear alisa... i like the intensity of proximity conveyed... it is indeed enchanting to be enchanted... :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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