Indoor Spinning

I find myself more in my mind these days

quietly sensing the ravel undone

left to it's pretenses

there's no need for juries

I simply stand here and wander away

back to the times of last pages

back when there was something significant to say,

worth meaning

worth repeating

and maybe even writing continuously

fueled by some mystical need

for speed.

we had to get it all down

before it left our stratosphere

and what a wonderful place we played

laughing for hours

crying non-stop at our beautiful creation

a dewdrop of eternity

as we stood there for what seemed to be forever

I will never forget you ...

Reviews

[Deekay mavhunga]

best poem ive read all year

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, DM for the kind compliment... I will be by soon.

Alisa

[. serah .]

~ wow... your ink is indelible, dear alisa... much like the soul who inspired this piece... ~ it's a heartsong that celebrates romance and the depth of love... ~ sometimes we don't know why perfect equations cease to be perfect but we cherish the perfection they touched just because it was so breathtaking... it's moments like that... that this piece reminds me of...

[Alisa Js]

Thank you serah,

The inspiration for this piece will forever have a place in my heart and soul as the time we spent together was purely magical in every way...

...I will keep him near in my thoughts forevermore...

Thank you for time and for stopping by. I appreciate you so much.

Alisa

[. serah .]

~ you're very welcome, dear alisa... it's a privilege to know you and to read your work... :)

[Tony Jordan]

Ethereal and magical Alisa and such bittersweet-ness too. The abandoned dancer cuts such a lonely figure - spinning in infinity (as Paul Simon might say)...
Ace write my friend.
Hope your weekend is treating you well.
x

[Alisa Js]

Hello Tony,

Always a pleasure to read your thoughts. Thank you for stopping by. Every day is a step forward in progress.

Thank you for asking.

Sending you smiles across the miles between us.

Alisa ;-)