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I Wonder

I Wonder

A Poem by Alisa Js

will I miss the shuffle of your steps
as they pass into eternity,
the smacking of lips
the icy glare of your stare
as you twist the truth
making it all about you,
I don't exist.

how sad we can’t speak the truth 
without irrational repercussions,
threatening accusations
an unintended consequence.  
hidden agendas finally revealed 
heart stopping statement of fact

I should have known 
I’ve always known,
only found it so hard to believe...

© 2018 Alisa Js



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I truly like this one. This one is going to my favorites library.

There is something about this poem that made me *feel* before fully understanding. This poem sounds like it was taken straight out of a past relationship for me, and I appreciate that you were able to capture the thoughts/emotions so clearly.

Yari

Posted 8 Months Ago


Alisa Js

8 Months Ago

Thanks Yari,

I am glad it resonated with you. Thank you for your time... I will be by.. read more
"how sad we can’t speak the truth
without irrational repercussions,
threatening accusations
an unintended consequence.
hidden agendas finally revealed
heart stopping statement of fact"

This happened to me last week. It won't prevent me speaking the truth in future as I know truth is more important than friendship with lies.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Alisa Js

8 Months Ago

Thanks Huw,

I know exactly how you feel.... and totally agree. Thanks for your commen.. read more
This speaks ro me alot closer than it should, your details filled me with memories. Nice Work =)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Alisa Js

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Avie.., I will be by soon
Beautiful detailed descriptions that still sound like genuine and natural speech. I love that it's a question and not a weak, self-pitying voice. Really liked it.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Alisa Js

9 Months Ago

Thank you, Emma...

They are questions from the heart and soul...with all sincerity ev.. read more
Emma

9 Months Ago

You too and hope things perk up for you soon
Alisa Js

9 Months Ago

They will! Thank you for your kind thoughts ❤️

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Alisa Js
Alisa Js

honolulu, HI



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