Just Biscuits and Peaces.

Poem - ATC

Tonight I'm going to gobble up the whole world. 

Like it is mine.

If only it was that easy.

Nom. Nom. Nom.

Dead. Dead. Dead. 

Those frivolous crumbs insist on existence though don't they?!

How petty, how poor. 

And any-who cares about the persistence of "The Poor?"

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked how you brought a important question to life.
"How petty, how poor.
And any-who cares about the persistence of "The Poor?"
A forgotten and rarely spoken subject. USA spend 1.2 trillion on war and medical for injured soldiers. Starvation would be gone if we spend a quarter of war budget for food, water and medicine. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you for leaving a freview :) You're right but then we get into overpopulation debates!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right.

[~]

strong theme delivered in a poignant way.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thanks very much :)

[andrew mitchell]

A poem of charm and innocence the way it was portrayed NOM NOM NOM blew me away with laughter. and then the poor! Yes A well written piece with flair. :)

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Haha thank you I am so pleased you read it in that way! I appreciate the review cheers - ATC

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

and some never see every individual part as a part of the whole.
You raise some serious questions here. We have a lot more to ask.
And a lot more to learn. You've given many a great start.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you your feedback is so appreciated and always brings a smile to my face.

[Emily]

Cool poem!
Well done!
Another one of my favorites!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thanks :D I'm really pleased you've made my day

[beautiful dreamer]

Wow good one lissy. I gotta say I like this short but intricate stuff

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

thanks Jen :) I like this one too.