Leaves to Grow

Leaves to Grow

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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is autumn here?

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Leaves to Grow

I'm somewhere, not sure where, out on Gascon Park,
the body drifting in and out of thought.
I hear my pores breathing, feel the rush of air
coinciding with my eyes.
I'm trying vapor for reality,
a mix of spirits and souls,
Odd......odd this aloneness
I'm forever dragging my head through
a thought forest and waiting for the leaves to grow.

© 2016 Alfred Kukitz


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Making the Al's poem rounds are we?

Thank you!

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful, peaceful poem. It's strange how you can take something that could be depressing and turn it into something that isn't melancholy at all.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Costa!

My forest is like a metaphysical church.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Jacob!

The back yard forest grabs me, pulls me. I wish to go every time.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is beautifully expressed poem.
exquisite.


Posted 7 Years Ago


and sometimes we are lost in thought, but at the same time not really thinking of anything in particular, like a forest without leaves on the trees... just waiting for a thought. or for the poet, an inspiration .....

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Ana!

I grow tired of deepness, just want to swim on the surface of things.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Often solitude drives us into deep thoughts and a desire for a change to happen.
The forest is a quiet serene place to gather these thoughts but if you take to long to make sense of them you'll watch the seasons come and go. Good one Al.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on September 27, 2016
Last Updated on September 27, 2016
Tags: Leaves, vapor, aloneness, forest

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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