Whisper

Whisper

A Story by Alfred Kukitz
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In a whisper deep and hidden among the vines I have found your soul.



© 2017 Alfred Kukitz



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Thanks Margie!

I love the enthusiasm you bring to my reviews!

Regards,
Al

Posted 1 Week Ago


Love this . . . would love to know a little more, but I'm trying to be content with this tiny graceful glimpse you've gifted us with. You make your reader "work" . . . filling in the open spaces (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


Thanks Chris!

Returning in myth to the pinnacle of Greek thought!

Regards,
Al

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


The "hunter" and the prey... timeless and classic.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Thanks Doodley!

If length had a reach it would fly inside my own mind settling for a small word among all the words of the universe.

Regards,
Al

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Deceiving, Alfred!

I was expecting a story myself only to find this single sentence. In itself it does tell a full story, such is the eloquence of the words. Those whispers do reveal so much don't they?

A fine write.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Thanks Sami!

Discovered by surprise on an old page.

Regards,
Al

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Amazing. I was expecting a long story. But those wonderful lines can be turned into a love story. Thank you great poet.
I'm on my mobile, so I can't put your poem in my library. I will when I get home.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago



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Added on November 19, 2017
Last Updated on November 19, 2017
Tags: deep. whisper, hidden, vines

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Green Lane, PA



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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end. more..

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