Whisper

Whisper

A Story by Alfred Kukitz
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In a whisper deep and hidden among the vines I have found your soul.



© 2017 Alfred Kukitz



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Thanks Margie!

I love the enthusiasm you bring to my reviews!

Regards,
Al

Posted 9 Months Ago


Love this . . . would love to know a little more, but I'm trying to be content with this tiny graceful glimpse you've gifted us with. You make your reader "work" . . . filling in the open spaces (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


Thanks Chris!

Returning in myth to the pinnacle of Greek thought!

Regards,
Al

Posted 10 Months Ago


The "hunter" and the prey... timeless and classic.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Thanks Doodley!

If length had a reach it would fly inside my own mind settling for a small word among all the words of the universe.

Regards,
Al

Posted 10 Months Ago


Deceiving, Alfred!

I was expecting a story myself only to find this single sentence. In itself it does tell a full story, such is the eloquence of the words. Those whispers do reveal so much don't they?

A fine write.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Thanks Sami!

Discovered by surprise on an old page.

Regards,
Al

Posted 10 Months Ago


Amazing. I was expecting a long story. But those wonderful lines can be turned into a love story. Thank you great poet.
I'm on my mobile, so I can't put your poem in my library. I will when I get home.

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Added on November 19, 2017
Last Updated on November 19, 2017
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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Green Lane, PA



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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end. more..

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