I saw me watching me

witnessing a falling leaf

I saw me watching me

Another sight

Another see

I saw a leaf among the trees

It sailed downward

It sailed alone

then just then

I saw me watching me

I saw me watching me

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A Classic reflection of autumn and seeing oneself in the fall. Lovely write Al.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob! I can't tell how many times I witnessed a leaf falling when alone and realize I'm the only one to witness its fall.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, powerful introspection here with the use of fall turning to November, life once in summer heading toward winter.
j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Ana!

Bless your thoughts!

Regards,
Al

[Ana Papaya]

Seeing yourself in the leaf. Falling towards your end. This is how I interpret this. So good Alfred.