Paint Me

my love

You paint me

With every color

You can't see

I dance in your pallet

Your love trances me

There are no shades of grey

It is as simple as

A rainbow breeze

I love you.

Author's Note

a poem for my lovely boy

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Simple and beautiful. Sometimes poems work best that way.

[MoriartyMesa]

Loving work to a special someone, honest and nothing if forced or pushed.

[Stan]

I like this one.

[Whiskurz]

Beautifully painted my friend......Whisk

[Sujash I. Purna]

ew! I hate these lovey-dovey things but this one really shook me up! That's a nice one! So much expressed in a few little lines!

[Destinyxi]

I love this poem haha. It's short but it's really sweet and right to the point.

[afra]

awwww dis poem is really sweet ... lucky boy

[Jordan A. Wilson]

heartfelt and nice

[eglantine]

lucky boy lol

I love "I dance in your pallet" love is very vibrant and can't be ignored easily, nor is it simply one color. I like "rainbow breeze" but maybe not in this poem... I'd take out the last three lines, personally, but in the end it is always up to the writer :) thanks for sharing!