this feeling...

The feeling of wanting to die

Was beyond my grasp

But now like a black cat creeping up behind you

It has come back

To take me away

And fill me up with hatred and despair

This feeling will never go away

Reviews

[Holly Soques]

Wow, this was really hard-hitting, especially considering the subject matter involved. I hope this isn't based on your true feelings, because otherwise I would be quite worried :P I love how you portrayed the inclination towards suicide as a 'black cat creeping up behind you' because no one really sets out wanting to be a suicide risk. This was a realistic, yet completely effective poem. Well done!

[alma :3]

thank you.....