Birds

Birds

A Poem by alternative_be
"

Something that sprung to my mind, observing the behaviour of birds

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Birds
 
Revengeful vultures
Praying on their prey
Previously deceased
Laughing at the
 
Buzzards
Praying in the sky
For they want live stock
As a challenge
 
Mocking the seagulls
Hovering over the harbour
Looking for the easier way out
Smiling at the
 
Garden pigeons
Waiting on humans
Coming out into the garden
In order to be … fed

© 2008 alternative_be



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this was very sweet. I adored it. I love pigeons.

Ich lebe in einem
alten Haus, wo nichts
in Siegesgeschrei ausbricht,
Geschichtsbher wlzt
oder Blumen pflanzt.
(bukowski)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you show the chain of commands in the different birds and their habits, an interesting and keen observation indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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You have a knack for capturing "the way it is". Very nice indeed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GREAT synopsis of the varios birds and their feeding methods...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, the connection between stanzas work Wonderfully.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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alternative_be

Somewhere in the country ..., Belgium



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Dear all, I'm a 46 year old woman living in Europe. My passions are: reading, writing, poetry, blogging, languages, nature, walking, making friends. Curious? Who am I? You can read it all in th.. more..

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