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Vicious

Vicious

A Poem by alternative_be
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Just describing my current state of mind

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Vicious
 
Veil of tears flowing
In my stream of consciousness
Can this go on running endlessly
In my broken mind?
On second thought, right now, I am
Unaware of my once much praised capacities
So it is in my wandering state of mind.

© 2009 alternative_be


Author's Note

alternative_be
At the moment I feel like an underachiever...

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This poem does not reflect the thoughts of an underachiever... These are the introspective thoughts of a poet... the one we all know you are. Confidence comes and goes, sometimes by the hour. Productivity? Depends on the day and what one considers productive. Today for me, it was the domestic front that received attention... yesterday it was my book.

Your inspiration will return. You probably already know where to find it and when you're ready, it will be there waiting for you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This poem does not reflect the thoughts of an underachiever... These are the introspective thoughts of a poet... the one we all know you are. Confidence comes and goes, sometimes by the hour. Productivity? Depends on the day and what one considers productive. Today for me, it was the domestic front that received attention... yesterday it was my book.

Your inspiration will return. You probably already know where to find it and when you're ready, it will be there waiting for you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've been there... we can feel like little despite our past accomplishments when our current state feels stale... we just have to remember life has its moments and we roll with it. Nicely written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's very nice! Not all poems need to be long. A lot are one sentence long. I like the simple form and simple concept. Nice work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 14, 2009

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alternative_be

Somewhere in the country ..., Belgium



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Dear all, I'm a 46 year old woman living in Europe. My passions are: reading, writing, poetry, blogging, languages, nature, walking, making friends. Curious? Who am I? You can read it all in th.. more..

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