Silent Witness

Silent Witness

A Poem by alternative_be
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Acrostic stream of consciousness ...

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Silent Witness
Is hovering like a fly on the wall
Let this be the situation
Endless procrastination about my call
In life
Nothing stays forever
Therefore I here write

What otherwise would have remained a secret
In the dark dungeons of my tormented mind
Though secrets sometimes should be kept
No matter how powerful a tool language can be
Endless is the source of malcontentment
So now that I am even without hope
Shall my lips be forever sealed?

 

© 2009 alternative_be


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alternative_be,

I am so pleased I came across your write. Powerful words indeed they are.

If we could only be a fly on the wall! However, how many times would we be smashed. Ouch...

Keeping things locked away, Hmmm... One thing nice about saying or writing these blacken thoughts - Once we say/write, there out there, we can't take them back - Yet we don't own them anymore either.

What’s healthier, holding it in building a character that is not ours or letting go being free? Hard toss up here at times. Faults of others are not ours to own even though we get tangled in their web.

Wonderful write

P.s. You might consider entering this into Poetic Infusion Society Book 2 DARK SECRETS

Legacy


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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alternative_be,

I am so pleased I came across your write. Powerful words indeed they are.

If we could only be a fly on the wall! However, how many times would we be smashed. Ouch...

Keeping things locked away, Hmmm... One thing nice about saying or writing these blacken thoughts - Once we say/write, there out there, we can't take them back - Yet we don't own them anymore either.

What’s healthier, holding it in building a character that is not ours or letting go being free? Hard toss up here at times. Faults of others are not ours to own even though we get tangled in their web.

Wonderful write

P.s. You might consider entering this into Poetic Infusion Society Book 2 DARK SECRETS

Legacy


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some things are better left unsaid and some need to be screamed out... know which is which is like walking the razors edge. That is why sometimes we bleed, to show we are human. A very uniquely philosophical write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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