Your Love

Another translation of a poem I wrote at the age of 15 ...

 

Your love

 

Passing by like time

Minutes, seconds, nanoseconds

Quickly, volatile as ether can be

 

Your kisses,

Hot

Fire from hell

 

Promises carried away by the wind

Words as unpredictable as the weather

Charming as a mousetrap

Why am I …

Your little mouse?

Author's Note

No ratings, because this is another excerpt of my teenage poetry ...

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Your kisses,
Hot
Fire from hell.. no ratings.. ok

[Expression]

Goed geschreven, vooral als je nagaat dat je toen pas 15 was! Misschien is het leuk om de Nederlandse versie ook te plaatsen..

[Wicahpi]

LoL I actually got a giggle out of it...reminds me of something.
Dark & Delightful (I know, but sometimes there is humor in dark
for whatever reason). I think this is well written for a teenager!!
Well written, period. Thank You for sharing!