Falling

Falling

A Poem by A.M. Everlasting
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I thought you would catch me...

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You said you’d catch me,

If ever I fall,

So it was surprising,

That you weren’t there at all.

Life’s walls fell upon me,

A choice I did decide,

Everything overwhelming,

...I committed suicide.

But halfway down it hit me—

I didn’t want to die.

But I was already falling,

 What you’d said was a lie. 

© 2009 A.M. Everlasting


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Ooooh I really like that!
Its dark and lovely. :)
You should TOTALLY Become a writer or something, no matter what you say.
You can't put this talent to waste!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are such a talented writer and you are becoming another one of my favorites here, again another great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A dreamer, a healer, and a lover - cycling through life on a rollercoaster of hope and its downfalls. more..

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