THE MESSAGE

THE MESSAGE

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Down the corridor,
Second on the left
Tea's in the cupboard
Sugars on the shelf.
The cup's on the sink,
Spoons are in the draw
and the milk I think
Is in the fridge door.
So just boil the kettle,
My place is yours
And I'll be home soon
So greet me at the door.
And later by the fire
We'll share some red wine
And naked with desire
We shall remain entwined.

© 2015 andrew mitchell



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Im sorry I missed this one Andrew. Its reads not like directions to the kitchen to make tea or coffee but rather instructions for a lifetime love to find happiness in your home and by extension in your heart. With a little earthiness added for good measure.
I really liked this one
Good writing A.
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO



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I like this it seems so simple at first glance, but more deep and committed when read. I guess that's how life with someone is. It starts out light and easy, then gets deep. And once you find someone who is the right "cup of tea" for you, then life goes by on a happier note. Good write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thank you rocksie for your words
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I would be playing that one over and over again :) So sweet and cozy, Andrew

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

why thank you lynn
I know I'm no match when it comes to your writings lol ;) short.. but perfectly described :D gr8 write :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

don't you believe it! you are a match for anyone. thanks for your kind words
I love the starting 4 lines ! Nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love the starting 4 lines ! Nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


How lovely! I love the softness here and the anticipation...tangible...precious piece! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

thank you poppy for your kind words
Who wouldn't want for a home in another ..... To come back to your house and not just have complete silence ......

Sweet

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

thank you my dear friend
What a lovely Christmas greeting this would be! You have me swooning...and I love it!



Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Imagine if santa was real lol! Why is santa always smiling? He knows where all the bad girls live!! .. read more
Kelly Scheppers

2 Years Ago

...shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Don't tell anyone!! ; )
andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Ok I won't tell anyone, only santa and I know! You're a bad girl!! ssssshhhhhhh!
I love this message! It sounds so inviting...how could you not want some of that tea?

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Or later red wine! Thank you for your kind words jesse!:)
jesserose99

2 Years Ago

well exactly, one thing leads to the next it seems Andrew!
andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

lol the progression of the procession! ;)
This put a smile on my face just from the reality in this work of literature. Some people see mundane in simplisity, but it is an artform and you master in it being able to make anything entertaining. Bravo!

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Sorry bear I'm late Thank you for such a big compliment

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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