THE SEARCH WITHIN A DREAM

THE SEARCH WITHIN A DREAM

A Poem by andrew mitchell
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To reconnect with a lost dream that's stopped short upon awakening and hopefully to be continued the next night.

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So sorry darling
The end has come
Our romance is fading
The day has begun.

But I'll try to find you 
Although you're hard to find
Located somewhere
In the back of my mind.

With my head to rest
I'll close my eyes
And I'll find our dream
Before all fades and dies.

For our nightly alliance
Is so enduring, we belong
I reach out to touch you
The feeling is that strong.

So I'll find that door
I've got the key
Just a matter of time
For you will see.

Then it will be 
Just you and me
And when I find you.....
We'll continue our play
A lover's dream
If only you would stay.

So its goodbye darling 
Just for now
Our love will continue
When I find you somehow.

© 2016 andrew mitchell



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alf
Hi Andrew. this is it, isn't it. That bitter moment when the realization strikes!!! That sense of sorrow and loss that flows from our mind to our soul and takes up residence!!! Love the hope expressed here. Owning the key is one thing, having the courage to use, is a whole different matter!!! decision are not easy when it comes to matters of the heart and you have expressed this so well, despite hiding the emotion between your words. Love this, you have certainly captured that emotion, alf

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Captured so well alf lol Thank you so much for a top review!
alf

2 Years Ago

Had to get serious on that one!!! That was a brilliant write, and I felt it!!!!



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Im a daydreamer. And i wish so often that i could stay in that state. Kinda romantic this write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

thanks scrap
Then it will be
Just you and me
And when I find you.....
We'll continue our play
A lover's dream
i really felt for these lines they are so great i don't have words to describe

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thank you zunie. glad you liked the write:)
zunie frost

1 Year Ago

I always love you work
You have fallen in love with the Succubus it seems, who abandons you upon awakening but part of you remembers, she lingers in the back if your mind.
Or perhaps it is the other way around, you abandon her. Then she wriggles back into your awareness as you succumb to sleep.
Strange in all the delicious ways, I love this one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Thank you Amy for your thoughts, twas only I who abandons for the real world awakens me till the nex.. read more
Yup we have all had those dreams and indeed I did last night lol!

Well described Andrew and sweet dreams!

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

so true John And how sweet they are when you re-connect.:) I now know why you are smiling! lol
I reach out to touch you
The feeling is that strong.

Waw .... very well written

And this beautiful scene of disconnecting to connect
Isn't love that way ?

Andrew this one is really cool
i am storing it for one of my rainy days

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your kind words. I'm controlling the weather now! rain soon!:)
Lingering Soul

2 Years Ago

No rain .... enough rain lol
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alf
Hi Andrew. this is it, isn't it. That bitter moment when the realization strikes!!! That sense of sorrow and loss that flows from our mind to our soul and takes up residence!!! Love the hope expressed here. Owning the key is one thing, having the courage to use, is a whole different matter!!! decision are not easy when it comes to matters of the heart and you have expressed this so well, despite hiding the emotion between your words. Love this, you have certainly captured that emotion, alf

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Captured so well alf lol Thank you so much for a top review!
alf

2 Years Ago

Had to get serious on that one!!! That was a brilliant write, and I felt it!!!!
Beautiful. We have all had those dreams that were so good then we wake up in and they disappear but leave their mark, leave us wanting more and we wish we could catch it again! Another great write. Nicely put my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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