THE TRANSITION

Caged in the day

With barb-wire fence

And high brick walls

Guarded are my thoughts.

A transition from a working day....

With the sun setting

Into the west

My gates are opening.

Free range are my thoughts.

......a day's end, I'm home.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Did I mention the chickens (free range lol?). Good little end of the work day/week ditty. We have all felt it.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks John

[alf]

Hi Andrew. I can just tell you love your work!!!! (lol) and again (lol)!! But even better, you look forward to going home. What a wondrous image . . . my gates are opening . . . what a welcome!! Love this, alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks alf I wanted it to be a reversal of what the hens live, caged at night, free to range in the day lol

[alf]

Yeah??????????? Really??????????????

[andrew mitchell]

This was the recipe base from which my life exchanged places and I laugh you know, my work sucks!

[andrew mitchell]

lol I like hooking you in alf lol Its like catching a marlin!!! Yeah?????? Really????? lol:):):)