Concerned!

Concerned!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

After a night of love, making
He notices a photo, a man
On her bedside table
He begins to worry....

"Is this your husband?" he nervously asks.
" No silly." she replies, snuggling up to him.
"Your boyfriend, then?" he continues.
"No, not at all." she says nibbling his ear.
" Is this your dad or your brother?" he inquires
" No, no, no!!!" she answers.
" Well who is he then?" he demands
"That's me before the surgery." 

© 2015 andrew mitchell



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LOL. yes, 'Concerned!' to say the least. this must have taken place 'down under'. a very possible scenario in this day and age ...

Posted 10 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Months Ago

yes the playhouse was once a tool shed lol Thanks for reading Pete
Wow - so our Sheila was once a He-la.
Oooh-la-la.

xD

Posted 10 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Months Ago

Thanks Tony lol
You never lose your ability to inject humour and surprise into your pieces Andrew. Glad I am not in his shoes though!

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Thank you kind Sir J McFayden
Would be a bad ending to a good evening. A surprise ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote just some fun!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
jeez!!! are you sure that guy did not get a heart attack

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

I would have !!! LOL!!!
wow thats a total twist! haha

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very funny!! I laughed out loud!

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Thank you Terry :)
Too funny, Andrew. You pulled this one from personal experience, ya?

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Hahaha No mattavelli but nice try!! lmao
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...I was not expecting that ending. BrafrickinO!!!

This is SO going in my library!!!!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

lol Thank you PANDORA, glad you smiled!:)
dam,this would be a rude awakening
it could have been bruce !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

Thanks wordman lol

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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