the pencil!

just nonsense really!

Sharpened are my thoughts

When turned rotations

Peel back to the core.

Disembarked are shavings

Old ideas , discarded.

My thoughts ready, pointed;

Graphite in words

Take on the world,

Starting with paper.

Reviews

[Hyacinth]

This is really, really relatable- what you're describing here. Well done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice metaphor here...well carried out...

our thoughts sharpen just enough to scratch them down on paper with a certain amount of clarity.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you kind sir! Always appreciated your reviews Jacob

[mattavelli]

Ooh, this isn't nonsense. This seems to be about focus. I need to focus more. I'm too sentimental... Thanks for the thoughts, Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks mattavelli and focus it is you wise one !!! lol