You can tell God was doodling on his tablet!

You can tell God was doodling on his tablet!

You can see God's prototypes

Of man and women

In the making.

Just look in the wild.

Doodling he was

On his tablet

He just couldn't

Quite get it right!

Some animals, God's sketches

Evident in the wild today

The camel with two humps

Breasts in the making!

The poor elephant

With male genitals swinging

On his face .

All living sketches!

That's why...

when elephant saw 

naked man for 

the first time.

He asked man.

" How do you breathe through that!"

"Can you pick up peanuts?"

Reviews

[V]

I enjoyed reading it so much. Funny piece, simple to follow and almost hilarious. ;)

[andrew mitchell]

Sorry vanessa for the late thank you I missed this one!

[V]

It's ok. No worries ;)

[Neytri]

Well, confused with what you might have thought of while writing this. :);)
A funny poem I must say...

[andrew mitchell]

Sorry Neytri for the belated thank you.

[softlyfall]

This seems comical at first glance but when I realized that I had just accepted God as flawed, as full of frailties and stumblings as his own creation, I understood how intense this really is.
What a delightful way to push the boundaries, offending no one.
I am fairly certain I leave a trail of ruffled feathers in my wake. I will just follow you around instead, Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

haha Thank you softlyfall for a great review, it wasn't my intention as such but now I see a different slant on this lol.:)

[....................]

salted or unsalted?

hahahaha...love it!!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...hmmm, aren't we clever? ; )

[andrew mitchell]

Lol whats with the hmmm Kelly lol

[mattavelli]

Oh Andrew, I think you're on to something, or maybe just on something. Haha

[andrew mitchell]

Just pure entertainment Matt, drug free lol

[terry smith]

very funny!!!!!!! :)......

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Terry glad you had a smile lol:)