The Set Up!

The Set Up!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

                                                           The Set Up!
     
                                                                Okay!
                                                        Everything is in place.
                                                         The title is catchy!  
                                                           The scene is set.
                                                           Fishing rod ready,
                                                                 Baited.
                                                                 On line
                                                                  I wait!
                                                     If you find yourself reading this
                                                                GOTCHA!  
                                                            You're the bait!
                                                           Looking at the stats.   
                                               One view, two views, three views, four.........
                                                      One review, two reviews..........six......
                                                        When the right bait is used
                                                            everyone gets involved
                                                                   Hooked!

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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i'm the bait??? very clever sir! ... tho your title does a pretty good job of it by itself ... i don't think you'll get many hooked at my having visited ... but i dare flatter myself just a teeny weeny bit and think mayhaps one more can be tossed in the bucket on my account .. what great fun .. your humor is uplifting and such a great way to think of us coming together as a community every time we are hooked ;)
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

lol Thank you E for your kind words. It's surprises that bring the laughs!
Haha....very clever and funny. You worm!!!!hahaha

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

hahaha Thanks scrap for the smile!
he he...Once I made a video of a pair of shoes hanging by the shoestrings from the power line, slowly twirly in the breeze...about 5 minutes worth hahaha...you wouldn't believe how many people watched the whole 5 minutes waiting for something to happen!
This made me grin :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Hahahaha softlyfall! You are as wicked as I am on jokes lol!:)
yes we are hooked lol ................ :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Especially those Canadian residents!! lol:)
Nisreen

8 Years Ago

lol .... yes lol
lol you got personality mate. and you got me here! LOL.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Hi Rinzin Long time no hear! Happy New Year too Thanks for your thoughts and I shall visit you too. .. read more
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Rinzin Samdup

8 Years Ago

hey....yeah i was off this site for a long time. Been caught up with daily routines and failed to re.. read more
haha nice set up... got me!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you kind sir
I'd like to say something but it's a bit hard with this hook in my lip so hooray! what a great idea you had here, bravo :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you richard
...ah I have felt like shark bait on more than one occasion ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

thank you terry
See, this is why I wouldn't make a good fisherman...taking the hook out of the fishes mouth! Ewww, and ewwwwwww!

I'll bring the snacks, how about that? ; )

Thanks for the comedy. Some of us need a reason to smile, but with YOU around, it's pretty much automatic!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Lol Thank you Kelly and I always enjoy your exceptional writes!
Sneaky idea for a write and a review. Kudos. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

lol sneaky it is thanks Kathie

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Added on September 25, 2015
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andrew mitchell

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