Time ran out!

Time ran out!

Dissipated my love 

in clouds now lost,

distant was she.

Tears would fill

my hourglass full

on love wasted.

When she broke

our hourglass

I knew..... 

time was running out.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

had something like this happen many years ago..the hour glass shattered...like my heart...

i felt this one..sifting through my mind and heart.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your words Jacob. Yes it happened to me in my teens if I remember

[Cryingkate]

Tonight I seem to be catching a lot of word play-on's
Tonight I see a familiar hourglass lately for you and it happens to be Christmas Time :-)
Cute write.. just in time :-)

Merry Christmas !

[andrew mitchell]

Merry Xmas to you Cryingkate and thank you. Did Santa find you?

[andrew mitchell]

He knows where all the bad girls live!! haha!;):):);0

[Cryingkate]

Oh real funny..... But na na na na na na ...... Santa Loves me.... he's gonna make me hot very soon.
He is bringing me a new Miller Furnace to keep me and my Boy Chester (canine) nice and warm...
I know what you got !.... ha ha ha You got a frying pan upside your head and a broken hourglass.....

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha my writes are fiction I just choose to write in "I" You made me laugh and I'm only teasing Kate. Its hot 36 here at present. I want cold!

[Cryingkate]

That's fighting terms there Andrew...I'm freezing cold . I'm tempted to put gloves on.
Send me some of that heat that your hogging...:-)

[andrew mitchell]

You can have it all! We live in the hottest Capital in the world I'm told and I feel it!!!:(

[Cryingkate]

I'm Jealous.............

[wordman]

those tell,tale signs are hard to overlook !

[andrew mitchell]

Merry Xmas Wordman, yes many a song has been written of the signs! Thank you Sir!:)