A diary of a madman.

something different I hope.

A diary of a madman.

Discontent lies

on feelings not met.

Was there a taming of the shrew

or the shrewd?

From whence the bread came, fresh

I became stale.

Did the atoms rejoice on her departing?

She was a few electrons short on her passing!

I bought a carpet!

No magic ride!

She spoke of words

not supporting my wheels!

Nor the feed

for the need

kept me satisfied.

A diary of a madman.

Reviews

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Some fantastic lines Andrew! Sounds like the wheels fell off...I enjoyed this sir. Starz

[andrew mitchell]

Starz, glad you enjoyed, I shall dissect your writes in retaliation of your kind words hee hee! :) Thank you for reading!

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting piece. I picture a break up, and the scrambled feelings that sometimes accompany the loss. Perhaps I am totally off base but that is where this one took me.

[andrew mitchell]

You got it in one KLGoode Thanks for reading

[Tony Jordan]

This made me laugh, then ponder, then grin a wry grin - but not necessarily in that order.
Overall it is like a rubiks cube that one can flit around to read an entirely different poem. (Sure a madman wouldn't keep things in a chronological order anywhoo, am I right?) lol
I like it

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for reviewing Tony and for the smiles, funny how infectious they are and how they carry. Maybe this madman had a compulsive disorder lol

[Tony Jordan]

Yes very infectious.... like a nice STD
Lmao