Our house is a very,very, very nice house!

Our house is a very, very,very nice house!

Always be kind to a ghost,
you may become one,
and remember....
if there's a resident ghost
where you live,
you are the intruder.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

You very much drew me in with your title, which I could hear being sung in perfect harmony by CS&N. Then your poem takes an unexpected turn, but still enjoyable & thought-provoking. Being an outdoorsperson all my life & now living on the edge of wilderness, I always think about how this is the land of the wildlife & I am the visitor. But your poem takes this idea to a completely different place, which makes it fun & original.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Barley girl, I do like CSN too. How lucky are you on the edge of the wilderness. Thanks for commenting, lovely words. Happy New Year to you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

dealt with two ghosts during my life...one was a kind presence...he was happy i was there to look out for his 82 year old widow, (my landlady)..

and the other was a troubled young girl...who came to me in a late night vision and actually stayed for approximately 45 seconds or so.

yes, they are there and we are intruders--

"with two cats in the yard, life used to be so hard, now everything is easy cause of you"

j.

[andrew mitchell]

Great song Jacob and how fascinating the experience. Thanks for sharing.

[Ken Simm.]

I used to have a nagging ghost in an old house. but when he got up to any tricks I told him I could see right through him. Didn't stop him though.
I've got to say I do like your wit.

[andrew mitchell]

how fascinating ken. thank you for your words.

[Tony Jordan]

I think Ken had those big windows in that old house. The ghost could see him coming.
xD

[Ken Simm.]

Why am I channeling Kennth Williams now? Ooooh Matron.

[Tony Jordan]

Lol- that's class.
I do a mean Sid James
"Hehaahaahaah" - see.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes! Carry on gang!:)

[Tony Jordan]

Haha - Carry on Regardless ...
xD
Happy 2017 dudes !!

[Ken Simm.]

i'm tempted to say Infamy, Infamy, they've all got it infamy! But I won't.

[andrew mitchell]

lol happy new year guys

[Tony Jordan]

...and watch when you throw the spilled salt over your shoulder - you might blind them !!

[andrew mitchell]

Lol that reminded me of the film To the Devil
a daughter. Thank you for reading Tony.