How much?

There was only one

price  to pay 

for the cost 

of living.

as there was for those who wasted it.

Reviews

[Chase Dylan]

Who wastes what when living...? At what price...? Who knows... Very well penned...

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much silente

[Chase Dylan]

You are welcome...

[Lydia Shutter]

Too many waste their lives, no doubt. We all pay a price every day. Lots of thoughts in this short one, Andrew. Good job. Lydi**

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Lydia:)

[KWP]

ooh you leaving us with something to ponder - why - I like it and ponder I shall as I traipse of into the field of dandelions. So few words, so much to say - very well conveyed Aussie X

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sydneysider:):)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Andrew... If only Congress could learn from so much waste. We the people learn better from mistakes than do our elected leaders who promise to do our bidding. In their minds, their priority is to make the rich... richer...
It is a sad "tale"... "The best of times and the worst of times". (The tale of two cities). Truly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for reviewing Pat:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

I think you pushed the limits on this one beautifully. Great poem.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much for stopping by gaa

[Mr.Writer]

This is a great poem! Keep it up!
The message you gave was clearly stated and made sense! :)
We shouldn't waste time in life and should learn to value it

[andrew mitchell]

thank you Mr. Writer for your nice review.

[Terpsichore]

He who pays the piper calls the tune, yeah, right!

Life is short,the bill when it comes unexpected and we are foolish to waste as much time as we do, yet I'm as guilty as the next man.

You do hit the nail on the head don't you.

T

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Terpsichore :):)

[Beccy]

No change given huh;
story of everyone's life that is. :))


Beccy.

[andrew mitchell]

hi beccy thank you for reading and yes how true

[Pete]

this is interesting. very philosophical. there is a price to be paid for not living life to the fullest as well as the unavoidable price we all bear in order to live & survive. live, thrive & survive as they say - with emphasis on thrive!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Pete, you are spot on!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Encapsulated from a small amount of words comes the roar! I am Wowed!

Regards,
Al

[andrew mitchell]

Al to get a review by you is catching that big fish, thank you for reviewing.