Knock!Knock!

Knock!Knock!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Knock! Knock!
Who's there?
God!
God who?
Oops, sorry! Wrong number!

© 2017 andrew mitchell



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Nice one dear Really amusing

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Is God even there? Sometimes you wonder. Just sometimes.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol...wrong numbers can be great distractions sometimes....;)

Keep this going....you could end up on a stage.....

Posted 1 Month Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Month Ago

Lol my two minutes of fame!
Hahaha thanks for the laugh

Posted 1 Month Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Month Ago

Thank you Dotty just having ridiculous fun! :)
Or, he might have been in the wrong universe.
This was a good one. :)100

Posted 2 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Month Ago

Thanks for reading.
goddammit haha I really needed this lol. I don't know what to say. I feel so sinful laughing at this! omg, look what you did. I feel the need to go to confession, so find me at the nearest bar- I mean I mean... Cafe. Great write, Andrew!

Posted 2 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

2 Months Ago

lol thanks roma
Oof! Very timely pun. Brief and to the point, but it works well like that.

Posted 3 Months Ago


This was pretty humorous. Thank you for the necessary laughter. I appreciate it.

To the point, and succinct in its delivery. Something like that is admirable.

Posted 3 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Months Ago

thank you for your words and smiles
I read this yesterday when I needed a serious laugh, but couldn't give my review because of my slow internet, so thank You for gaving me yesterday a needed laugh, and like You, I think many even forget that there is a name of "God", or let us be free enough to say, that there is a "higher power", forget that there is humaniy inside them, a humanity that's a part of the "whole".

Thank You again for a good laugh, for the truth and message that lay behind these wonderful words.

Posted 3 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Months Ago

I thank you too for the smile for your words.
Light

3 Months Ago

anytime* :)
God is always there. thanks for sharing this nice poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Months Ago

thank you roxane

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Added on May 31, 2017
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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