Knock!Knock!

Knock!Knock!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Knock! Knock!
Who's there?
God!
God who?
Oops, sorry! Wrong number!

© 2017 andrew mitchell



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This was pretty humorous. Thank you for the necessary laughter. I appreciate it.

To the point, and succinct in its delivery. Something like that is admirable.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for your words and smiles
I read this yesterday when I needed a serious laugh, but couldn't give my review because of my slow internet, so thank You for gaving me yesterday a needed laugh, and like You, I think many even forget that there is a name of "God", or let us be free enough to say, that there is a "higher power", forget that there is humaniy inside them, a humanity that's a part of the "whole".

Thank You again for a good laugh, for the truth and message that lay behind these wonderful words.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Weeks Ago

I thank you too for the smile for your words.
Light

3 Weeks Ago

anytime* :)
God is always there. thanks for sharing this nice poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Weeks Ago

thank you roxane
i can feel it,lol yeap i can

Posted 3 Months Ago


ha ha. Funny. :) Yet, written so completely.


Posted 4 Months Ago


What I love about God...is the sense of humor. Thank goodness since I am one sarcastic filled human being. It helps me to know they are all in support of my bad self lol..xo

Posted 5 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for the laugh.
I really enjoyed this...........

And that sure sounds like god (to me)

Posted 5 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny, then the truth of it hits you and it's not. Well done: compact, concise and complete! My favorite.

Posted 5 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

5 Months Ago

Thank you Carol for your review and for stopping by:)
Knock knock... whose there? Olive...
Olive who... Olive you... have a nice martini...
a smashing wrong number!

Posted 5 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

5 Months Ago

thank you pat lol
you have such an Aussie sense of humour - I love it X

Posted 5 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

5 Months Ago

thank you elizabeth

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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